Thursday, August 14, 2014

The Universal Comments

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Beached upon the distant third stone
Nestled slight half a parsec
Around the nuclear infernos
Of an irascible blooded star
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Kevin Patrick
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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2014

And in a blink of the cosmic eye, we will be gone..... Great poem Kevin.

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* Sunprincess * 14 August 2014

.............this is cosmic, universal and full of the mystery of life....when we look at the big picture.....so far we have found no other life in the universe...it's actually a miracle that earth even has life....if we were a little closer to, or farther from the sun...then I wouldn't have had a chance to read this wonderful poem...no wait this poem wouldn't be here for me to read....so I am going to count my blessings.....and say a little prayer of thanks, to the creator of life...oh and I loved reading this write.....you created a wonderful poem...

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