Friday, February 28, 2014

The Unity In Oneness Comments

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There is Love that could fill the sky,
And all the hearts that wonder, ‘Why? '
When you are sad, and far apart from love,
Here is the answer from above:
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

In peace the heart to reunite With All —itself in sparkly light; And there's no sorrow to be traced In all the hearts that it embraces......touching expression with nice theme. It is a beautiful poem on unity. Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

There is Love to fill the sky! Thanks for sharing.

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Daniel Brick 29 September 2014

I remember in a study of ancient Greek philosophy the writer said the key question for early philosophers was Why are there Many when originally there was just One? He cited both rationalist responses to that question (Aristotle) and mystical (Plato and his descendents) . Your poem definitely takes the mystical approach as in the line IN PEACE THE HEART TO REUNITE WITH ALL - that's a return to the original Oneness. I find that line very appealing, even persuasive. Also appealing is the god who says later in the poem for what you are, and can be/AWAKES A MIRACLE IN ME. That is beautiful beyond words.

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