The Unique Resort Comments

the contrast between life and death is a balance between beauty and ugliness...yes we are like the strangers looking for paradise and rest but as soon the breath taking garden is before us we cannot face its condition because we feel insecurities and uneassiness...i like it. ...the child of flesh to his mother spirit....

you started from a place of comfort; contending with a beautiful metaphor; your language is credible and encouraging; a poem i can read again and again

Very interesting and different. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for the read.

This poem speaks on a couple levels or more from many points of view. We're born naked/free but by 5 or 6 years olds we're fully dressed in our society's garmentsAmrit. a 10+++: beliefs, values, and attitudes...prejudices, hates, racism and other 'isms'. Where is the 'Unique Resort'? I'd say, each one has to create it within your naked being and all will be made whole. A profound poem and 10+++

Is is heaven like Resort in real....... Its really beautiful. How much high you can fly, or shine in this fashion, It depend upon you.......unlimited imagination. I loved it...........

A poem like this can seduce people out of their clothes for a noble purpose. Inspiring; best advertisement Nudity could ever have. Starts off great and ends up great. A bit prosaic in spots but always the imagery, the belief in the life, is there. A poem worthy of having the rhythms worked on. I especially like the idea expressed in the last two lines, but just as especially do not care for the words used there, which are totally inadequate to do justice as a prime ending. You were inspired enough with this one that it carries through to the reader, at least to me. I was always open to the idea of Nudism, being a born Nature lover myself. This seems a paean to the glories of such an outing, such natural freedom. Pity it takes so much nerve, but it does.

an unique illusion isn't it? .....a pure n childish thought praising / encouraging innocence. there must be such a resort somewhere up in heaven where God waits for his children n you wrote about it..really nice.

Well expressed with a great feel. This fantasy poem is crafted well with a noble thought. Good one.

it is an amazing poem, the way you express your ideas is very nice....thank you for sharing....Mari

'Freedom will come as you take responsibility' You Unique Resort where I believe one gets away from the Mortal world to a world of sanctity And when he leaves your resort he again enters the mortal world full of wishes, desires,

i agree to all the positive comments here... i liked reading it mostly because now we are going in a resort and celebrate a birthday party there of my cousin... wow, very timely!

This is a story beyond imagination, could be considered as poetry due to deep thinking, creative in any way. But I would rather say this is a kind of conversation with persuasion as if an ad enticing the reader to join the author in a fantasy island. In general term this is a conversational poetry. Unique indeed.

As I read your poem you pulled me right into the Unique Resort and I had a great visit. A very powerful write with many intriguing moments. I liked the read very much and thanks for the invite. Lynn

Celestial Abode …an offbeat poem…but reality is poetically possible… Well what happens after final exit…indeed an enigma and riddle…? But it reminds me some races who are far from civilization…as found in Andaban Island…and other parts of world …who live like that… But your fantasy poetry added many colors of spectrum and all possible flairs of beyond imaginations...wow! If I were in such a land…great psychic catharsis from my civilized chain… Where we’re protocol oriented and etiquette buff …we’re tired of and fagged out lolol Thanks for taking us such to a fairy land…and helping in our buoyancy unlimited 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

I like the ninth stanza: Moreover, our resort has got, one unheard of facility That is when you enter a wonderful thing will happen, Your mind and heart will instantly become transparent. Everyone can see what's going on In others mind and heart, Your communication at a much deeper level will start, And you'll understand others, ‘n appreciate. Love, compassion will be your soul mate, Free from the loads of conditioned self, Enveloped in a new and real freedom, Your awareness dancing On the silent beats of a drum. I think it's a bit difficult to leave something behind when you had lived with it for so long even when others say it's just a dress or a car or a house, but for you is something more than 'It's just' and afterwards you'll have to learn to let go. Something that we always do. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

unique it is.......nice write! ! !

I shall never be unique because I like intrigue.

The poem gives all the details of your experience in the unique resort and is so tempting for others to try to pay a visit that place

Wow, Leaving all our material belongings behind for a highly spiritual experience, where we become transparent thinkers making us better humans in the end. Very inspiring, Your poem makes me want to go in the instant to reflect and meditate on the beach or in the woods become a bit more spritual and less material. and in the end serve without reservation receiving the most wonderful peace of mind in return. Sorry for that long commont. i just wanted to express what i felt after reading your poem your poem is so wonderfully written' Thanks a lot. It is truly inspiring. Keep it up Amrit. Really inspiring

really nice poem....love the imagery