Wednesday, June 30, 2021

The Uninvited Guest ~ Part.3 Concluding.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I request you to read the two earlier Parts before reading this poem..

Then came the unwanted part of my story
About which everybody warned and cautioned
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2021

As Poet Zumas Millamo said here below: So very true. By the way, you added lovely metaphors in the ardent poem. A very thought-provoking poem with philosophical tints

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2021

To my Favourites, Mr. Asim Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2021

The mirage of life seemed endless chain of accidents With endless cycle of sufferings. So true, BUT happiness and Love must never be forgotten too, BUT this is an excellent series of emotive poems. I have enjoyed endlessly and true philosophical points are weaved herein. Prefectly rendered!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2021

By the way: I have read the previous two series and now this adorning poem so true! 5 Stars full on Top, Mr. Asim Sir! I have enjoyed very much

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Zumas Millamo 30 June 2021

We all have one or the other uninvited guest, they are our husband/ wife/ lovers etc and when they leave or do not do what is expected we go through this pain.

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Varsha M 30 June 2021

Oh! This is really uninvited guest brought the real bad omen. Painful ending.

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Poetic Sky 30 June 2021

You are master class poet when it comes to love poems.

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Poetic Sky 30 June 2021

As I thought, you did full justice with the subject and fantastically concluded this series of love..(Uninvited Guest series) Lovely and painful.

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