The Uninvited Guest ~ Part 2 Comments

Nothing last for long and for ever. See the life of Bill Gates, recently the uninvited wife separated from him and only he knows how painful it is...

To my list of favourite as well.

Mind blowing series, I am sure next would be the heart-break and pain. You have justified the love in every form Dear Poet.

Have ro come back to finish the series. Fantastic read. To my Poem List.

There are too much to be said but my comments are being aborted by the system that it is hard to write without disturbing the flow of thoughts.

' ' The ceiling fan throws and arrow and the clock does a cat walk, .', beautiful lines from an amazing storyk

I like how you crafted this poem. So detailed with superb images that transported me to the scene and being one with the person referred to in this marvelous weite

The extreme happiness will lead us to the realm of life that is not consistent with the way we were molded deviating feom the morals ingrained since our existence

Sometimes the love and joh we felt for someone could alter our very being.

by rediscovering your own consciousness, you enjoy the same things a little differently. The message is the same, I reckon

DJ liked both the parts. Nicely written.

There are definitely lessons to be learned here. Brilliantly written.

I liked your conception of possesiveness one has in love for the JOY one acquires. I liked how you creatively conceived Joy's elaboration. I liked it.

You use liked to link that line with the next that together with the other made one union, but the coherence is not good. The rest of the poem deviates from the starting theme of it. This poem is not altogether clear.

Joy of life and love nicely explained.5Stars

Wonderful poem, Barring one thing all others are to share.5**

Wow now things are getting clear to me. Lovely series.5**