The Uninvited Guest ~ Part 1 Comments

Very creative thinking. I enjoyed your theme.

Circus is about to begin.

Master class poem, I liked the way you described the love and its trap.

Beautiful images and nice flow that tingle the mind and flutter the heart. To my Poem List.

The title alone and the opening stanza grips like cobra forces a reader to finish this wonderful story

by rediscovering your own consciousness, you enjoy the same things a little differently 5 Stars Full on Top for this philosophy

DJ liked it. This is nicely written.

I am also searching for the answer...I kept it closed, every time, Never allowed anyone to try Closely guarded my dreams Like a pearl in the shell How did that happened?

Yes the magic of love brings them on and....it happens and just happens. Full stars.

TRE liked it hence 5*******

Fantastic poem. I am trying to figure out what to interpret. Almighty, Lover, Nature.

Wonderfully penned that it touched my heart Bravo!

Dear Asim ji, i love it when you combine nature with philosophy and give it special flavour. Top stars

The uninvited guest has charmed us with song of the birds, blooming of the flowers and fluttering of the butterflies.

Perfection!

Change is inevitable part of our life. And some things are not in our control. They just happen. So keep enjoying the beauty in whichever form it comes.

Very will written poem, with very delightful ideas but the fundamental integrity is still in good shape: I like the last stanza, The meaning of my life changed The song of birds, The blooming of flowers....Blessings Brother