The Unfortunate Beak Comments

Damn, that was the last one! !

Oh, forgot to read this one before commentiing. Can do that later. Hang on! ! ...That was a mistake - a big mistake. Just read the damned thing. I'll pretend I didn't. Good, well worked imagery, steady tempo, all the formal elements to a high standard. All in all not much wrong with this, and with proper attention I don't see why that duck shouldn't go fishing again.