Thursday, February 19, 2009

The Unforseen Comments

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You see them moving around in the small dark bag like thing,
Your eyes watching every movement that is made,
Every mistake that could possibly be made.
You heart tries to keep beating,
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Leah Wright
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 20 February 2009

Another good poem. Keep it up.

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