Consternation I had,
was giant and massive,
was a matter to dismay,
and a matter to confound,
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wow..the first 4 stanzas make such a great poem. you have sooo much feeling and.....vision inside your eyes, connected to the thesaurus on your tongue. This could easily be 3 or 4 poems. I really like your style. wow 17? cant wait to read your stuff after your heart has been lifted high and then trampled on and lifted high once again.
Very well written and some words are still missing from my vocabualary. It's about love, isn't it? The love is a mere fabricated icing that a lover decorating on an ugly looking brown piece of baked loaf. You may not agree with me. Any way thank you Steve. You are very good and the poetic language of your's is at a very high level. It is a record that each poem of you rated with best ratings. Thank you for sharing your marvellously written poetry with us.
Thank you palitha, for your perception. It's alright that you pointed out your opinion, , well, thank you for the comment.
who gave her a reverence, staying behind. My love is unfeigned and true!