Saturday, November 15, 2008

The Unexplainable Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I look into your eyes,
and smile at thier gleam,
my heart fills with joy,
until it's bursting at it's seams.
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kimber harrison
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Brianna Trombley 06 December 2008

true love, the feeling so surreal, and though you may have never felt it, you write so beautifully about it, great write

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Max Robertson 05 December 2008

i know how it feels to not know much, i'm only 13 for christ's sake. still, you and i both show what we can do, even at a young age. i like this, catchy... yet it kind of *envelopes* you. keep it up and keep in touch =) Phillip/Max

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Life is lived only when love is expressed. Keep living! Really nice.

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Richard Post 15 November 2008

very lovely poem, bravo

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