Friday, July 31, 2015

The Undesired Comments

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The crop was almost ripen,
The birds were stealing grains from the field,
Wife of the farmer,
Was busy in removing the undesired plantations,
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Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS

You weave beauty with words. Enjoyed much.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2015

Almost ripen! ! Then came a sudden destruction. Nice piece.

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2015

I completely enjoyed reading this, my friend

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 July 2015

What a different poem! Amazing! ...............................10

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