At first glance, he seemed so young,
And so small...
'He's only thirteen' someone whispered.
Only thirteen and holding everyone
...
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Brilliant imagery depicting a marvelous scene... everything combines in creating a wonderful mood. Well done, Dorothy! Brian
Dorothy, this is a very enchanting poem so beautifully written. The flow seem to drift along like a gentle stream taking the reader along with it. Great write. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David
Thank you for the list Dorothy. This is what I was looking for. A complete statement in prose description. You are clearly the writer I thought you were. I'll read another. GW62