Sunday, March 18, 2007

The Understudy Comments

Rating: 5.0

At first glance, he seemed so young,
And so small...
'He's only thirteen' someone whispered.
Only thirteen and holding everyone
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Greenwolfe 1962 19 March 2008

Thank you for the list Dorothy. This is what I was looking for. A complete statement in prose description. You are clearly the writer I thought you were. I'll read another. GW62

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Brian Dorn 18 March 2007

Brilliant imagery depicting a marvelous scene... everything combines in creating a wonderful mood. Well done, Dorothy! Brian

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David Harris 18 March 2007

Dorothy, this is a very enchanting poem so beautifully written. The flow seem to drift along like a gentle stream taking the reader along with it. Great write. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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