Sunday, November 13, 2011

The Underground Train Comments

Rating: 4.0

Every morning you avoid my eyes
You'd rather read my posters
You'd rather read my posters
Study shoes
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Margaret Beil
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Luvo Mjayezi 17 November 2011

Wow this excellent! Definitely one of my favourite poems. I love the meaning behind the repetition. The critique herein is very witty. You give a wonderful depiction of the everyday people if you'll let me characterise society in such a manner. You have no idea how frustrating and exciting it is when I read a perspective of this magnitude from a fellow citizen to another. it makes me go beside myself wanting to star some kind of international revolution or enlightening or wakening campaign. Whatever happened to radical people that the fought against monarchs, governments and religious structures in attempts to preserve humanity? ? ? I can't help but believe that now is our time to be those individuals to carry on the 'flame'. Your work is very inspiring

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