Wednesday, April 25, 2007

The Undergraduate Comments

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He runs around the campus premises
All of his life, but the gate were closed all the time.
The wall is too high though he tries to jump
And the sentry is very rough inquires the documents.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 25 April 2007

I believe it was John Kennedy who observed that life is unfair.10 for your excellent, thought provoking poem. And prayers for a better tomorrow. Warm regards, Sandra

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Amanda Lukas 25 April 2007

Your poem expresses to me hopelessness. 'Expired for enrollment'? I prefer to believe it's never too late. Jump higher and you'll get over the wall.

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Arabian Heart 25 April 2007

l like it it express a soul like no other this is a good poem

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