Saturday, September 24, 2011

The Uncried Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

the laughter singing and joy,
movement of the footsteps,
up the stairs and then the shouts,
shut up and go to sleep,
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Sharron Stephenson
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Terence George Craddock 29 September 2011

A sad poem of violated childhood, the past we cannot change, only the future offers choices, and possible restoration of souls.

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Liz Chiffers 27 September 2011

this poem comes from the heart. the pain is clear to see. i hope thnis poet is getting the help she really needs. well written this is the first poem i have read by this poet and it will not be the last.

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Shadow Girl 26 September 2011

wow sharon, powerful write..sometimes letting go of emotions is the first step in understanding them...well done xo

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Eric Cockrell 24 September 2011

strong and revealing... it takes courage to bare the heart! good poem!

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Shaikh Haneef 24 September 2011

Hi! Sharron good poem wih a good poet, Thnks.

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