You sailed to the deepest core of my soul
You opened every closed door of my mind
With an angel's pride.
Like a morning singing bird
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...My love! You found the path Towards the obscure valley of my heart So easily! Every dumb cell of my body Achieved a language of love.... Piew Dutta! Wow! Marvellous! I liked that way you wrote this poem, you have your own language for poetry, it's great. Thumbs up!
Whenever I endeavour to solve The mystery of your eyes, I can feel you breathe and rise Within my soul. I felt your love all of a sudden In a dreamy obsession Simply lovely...Amazing piece of poetry...Keep writing and sharing
Love pours out from the north-west corner of your heart.......no dearth of adjectives for your obsessions......the Cupid's dream will be true one day....the nymph's thirst will be satiated.....wonderful lines by you...
'Until the earth.......wait again' is very nice.Very nice.
in every word and line loved this Love expression. even surpassing everything of my Still a Beauty (sorry) ! ! Thank you for sharing Poet. Am sure you will grow much in this love and will be a great Poet! ! Amen.10++++! !