Saturday, December 4, 2021

The Unborn Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take my hand
I will never touch another living soul
And won't leave you hanging on the edge
Kiss my lips
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Anjandev Roy 10 April 2024

Wonderful write once again.... thanks a lot...

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Cowboy Ron Williams 15 December 2021

True story or your creative imagination? Either way, extremely well done and heartbreaking.

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Rebecca Navarre 06 December 2021

My sympathies! .. For such hurt written within this poem! .. So powerfully and emotionally expressed! .. May you find solace in God! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 December 2021

A gripping and sad poem, written with power and feeling.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2021

A fantastic poem loaded with love and emotion....yes, it's bitter sweet love dear LeeAnn. I sincerely appreciate the sensible concept that your poetic mind has conceived. Top score!

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David Wood 04 December 2021

LeeAnn, so full of hurt and pain, I share your deep emotions. My late wife had unstable diabetes and couldn't have the children I now miss. Her doctor said pregnancy would kill her and any unborn baby.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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