Tuesday, May 5, 2009

The Unborn Child's Request Comments

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'Like a tadpole he jumped in the womb and I couldn't sleep well
The whole night I was awake.' She complained to her husband.
'Mom! If I can stay a longer here that would be great.
You know why? I dreamed a better king who rules the World after hundred years and is it too long?
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Alison Cassidy 09 May 2009

Another powerful political poem about the precariousness of life in these troubled times. I don't blame your foetus for asking for more time before being born. Though my cynical self might suggest that one hundred years on things could be worse than they are today. A clever idea expressed with consummate poetic skill. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 07 May 2009

How nice it would be to always be safe, happy and secure. Very touching, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

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