Friday, October 6, 2017

The Unborn Comments

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She looks down her tummy and cries,
She's full with child and full of lies,
The broken promises and shattered dreams,
The promises made during passionate whims,
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CHRISTOPHER MUDIENYI
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

The broken promises and shattered dreams scribble mind and life searches for destination of birth and death. Bringing out unborn child in to Earth is joy and pride for mother. Motherhood knows about affection more. Mother hopes brighter future for child. Wonderful and emotional narrative poem is shared here...10

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Christopher Mudienyi 09 October 2017

Kumarmani Mahakul thanks so much for diligently reading my poems. you interpretation is just wow!

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