The Unanswerable Comments

I think thats the wrong guy to mess with. Just kidding, thats pretty good, the ending was perfect

poem was good as it gives message but why did you used obnoxius word p[oem is good but be careful never used obnoxius words send more poems to me

This comes from the heart - and shows a variety of anguishes, including about God, hard to beat that one, even love!

One must seek GOD then GOD will find you.

Very gud, agian...i luv the way u write, ur very talented...XDkeep it up10+

you should write a song..that's a compliment sweety...sounds like your mad the wrong person...remember God gave us a brain, AND free will.So don't be made at her, be mad at humans. But yea...good job.

I think you write lyrics. And it fits to some kind of music I do not hear.

This is a deep question on which we should ponder an instant. I am an optimist and believe that God is answering our questions in way that cannot be envisioned at naked eyes. Ur faith only could lead you to happiness! This one is flowing so well. Good Job!

I think you have a very well constructed poem here, my young friend. I see a lot of bitterness, but I also see some honest questioning of Gods intent for our lives. You know, God gave mankind a most wonderful gift. The gift of free will. Each person chooses for themselves what direction they take. Being imperfect humans, we all make mistakes and bad decisions from time to time, often with bad results. and, often, innocent people are affected. To blame God for results due to wrong decisions by man is, not only, a mistake, but futile. O K, I'm getting down from my soapbox now. As I said, I think you have a well constructed poem. Thanks for the invite. Best wishes Richard