Sunday, November 13, 2016

The Un-Perfect Murder... Comments

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You're making a witless lout of yourself
Can't you see, in your mirror of vanity
She said this, an' that, and finally she
Was as quiet and still as a cold body be
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
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R Soos 13 November 2016

thanks =: -) That doesn't happen enough in poetry!

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Randhir Kaur 13 November 2016

Oh..the woman was right...witless lout... Quite well. I loved it...amusing one..LOL Well written.

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Kim Barney 13 November 2016

Very funny story, FJR. Kept me captivated until the end.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

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