The Ultimate Comments

Another Shot ~! ! ! ! :) But wat is it about exactly~! ? ? ? ? Really About the goal or about the utimate soulmate~! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? OR is it so...., dats why u left a blank space after ultimate, so that people could understand it according to wat extent theycud think of it~! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Wonderful and encouraging. Keep writing!

I would have put 'goal' after The Ultimate...but that's me. You certainly scored a goal with this fine poem... We have to search our own souls to find ourselves and ultimately...our happy whole. Smiilng at you Tai