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nice poem u have here. great poet u know

wow..see, we all have nice works to share with others. this is one of them. nice poem my mate. keep the good work up!

Excellent figurative language... I liked it... Carry On with More poems... :)

hmmm... very intriguing i'm mind boggled.. thanx for sharing (:

deep poem... with interesting philosophical thoughts... This is not the end This is not the beginning... wonderful line, very true.

Good Poem and good theme!

well written poem, inspiring...keep writing...

..awesome writing...i loved every word of it....very powerful poem...keep on writing...

Like live commentary it has a special effect of sound.As if you are talking face to face.Very nice indeed.Thanks for sharing it.

Very nicely written Amir :)

Nice one Amir. You should write more :)

Very well written my friend, I can see you put a lot of time and effort into this one! Favorites!

Sounds like the ultimate. very well written, great images Swimming in the smoke of the bridges burned. The metamorphosis. Poetry at a very high level, Amir.

i like to vote this poem. great write

This is great! Very powerful, two years worth the wait.

I really like this poem. Every end is a beggining in one way or another and everything will end eventually.

I am not surprised on the fact that it took u 2 years to write such a master piece......

A great poem! Each line is written with true emotion.A fantastic wonderful brilliancy! Greatest ever poem for me.Thank you very much

Good poem. Sure, metamorphosis is all about man's existence. The poem points out the finality of man. One day we shall give account

Power Expressions of Emotions. Lovely Story line, sir my dear friend you did well on this one.