Thursday, March 27, 2008

- The Ultimate Desire - Comments

Rating: 3.2

the intense eyes reveal the hidden appetite,
the lips so seductive to have a bit of pie,
with the passion u see thru me makes me go wild
the luks so killing even the serial of killers wud die,
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shiza khan
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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 September 2008

Love is the ultimate desire, nothing old, rather universal appeal. Enjoyed this composition.

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Ershad Mazumder 02 September 2008

Siza dear, very old theme and thought.for thousand years lovers are saying this.give a new definition to love.but still i like it.

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 August 2008

This certainly was a seductive piece. I'm not sure that it was as complete and total an expression as I have read in other places but it was very good. Well worth a recommendation. GW62

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 August 2008

...words are here emitting truth.... a 10 has been clicked

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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2008

so much love in between the lines... reads good. congrats, shiza

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