Saturday, September 20, 2014

The Two I Trust (Sonnet) Comments

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There are two who will never forsake me
There are only two who will never give up on me
They always encourage me when I fail
One always pick me up when I fall
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Tinashe Mupedzapasi
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John Sky Dadzie 04 November 2014

Good poem man thanks for sharing

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 September 2014

The two I trust..soul and God and both are attached to each other and this poem sled slightly to trinity..nice one..third is your body ..

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 September 2014

Good sonnet......Tinashe......very well composed and touching.......thanks for sharing

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