Monday, September 8, 2008
The Two Bed Room... Comments
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I have here a virgin in my room,
So pleasant she is bloom,
on my bed sit so cool.
Her eyes dart here an' there...
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Absent Wryta
08 September 2008
Quite descriptive and sensitive. Really gets the imagination working. Good write
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
08 September 2008
It takes two to tango.............there's no impairment when love conquer! ! ! ! brilliant writes my bro Merlin.keep it up! !
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7/23/2025 9:44:40 PM # 1.0.0
Lovely poem...it has a nice flow. Good work!