Saturday, August 11, 2012

The Twisted Road Comments

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Traveling through life on it's twisted road
not always sure that we can carry our load
our back often bends under the heavy weight
as we make our way towards the open gate.
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Monica Partridge
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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2012

Excellent write, very well penned and a great sentiment expressed.

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Captain Cur 13 August 2012

Top of the line poem of burdnes shared by friends and loved ones. Smooth flow and nicely rhymed.

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