The Twilight Of My Years Comments
From this moment of death sentence
I promise you I will move on
I will rise to the shining sun
Even when clouds obscure the day
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Sincerest THX, Sandra Feldman for adding my poem to your favourites.
God knows what he is doing. Your life, your visions, your poetry and grace, a very great contribution to the unstable, human race. Beautiful and very sincere poem, a veritable song from deep within your beautiful, soul.
Sandra, sometimes when I'm feeling somewhat sad, I read some of the comments made by poets/poetesses on PH and they give me a burst of fresh energy. Yours are amongst them. And this series has so deeply moved me! Don't know where to begin to thank you for all of your support and encouragement!
Very fascinating poem, this magnificent poem deeply moves me, Top Score, Richard and to my Favorites
Sylvia, it makes me happy that my poem deeply moves you. THX so much for adding it to your favourites!
CONGRASTULATIONS, Dear Richard, today your poem is on Rank 61 of the Best Poems Of Member Poets of PH.5 Stars TOP Score!
Thank You so very much, Sylvia for bringing that to mine attention. I was not privy to this info. Many THX for the CONGRATULATIONS!
Dillip, THX so very much for adding my grateful to God poem to your favourites. That means a lot to me!
Jayne Louise Davies, THX so very much for adding my very grateful to God poem to your favourites.
Poet Upadhyay, THX so very much for visiting and for responding so very positively. Looking forward to reading some of your poetry.
David, I very much appreciate your very positive constructive criticism!
TWILIGHT OF LIFE IS RINGING ON THE POETIC DICTION; AWESOME; MAY GOD LONG LIVE YOU
Mahtab, THX so very much for your wonderfully positive response. And for your very kind and thoughtful wishes for God granting me a long life. God has been so very good to me. I must be setting some kind of record for the number of times that He has spared my life!
Mahtab, I had left you a very positive response, but it seems to have been lost. Very grateful to you for your very positive comments. And especially, for you wishing God to grant me a long life! God has been more than generous by having granted me more lives than a cat.
Jayne, I'm glad that you love this poem. It's my gift to God for giving me yet another new lease on life!
I will move on/ I will rise to the shining sun even when clouds obscure the day....touching!
THX so much for your positive constructive criticism, Dillip!
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7/19/2025 5:14:26 AM # 1.0.0
A hint of Blake, a dash of Wordsworth...and ALL Wlodarski. A brilliant poem, Richard.