Thursday, June 1, 2006

The Turning World Comments

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As light shines through a glistening dew drop,
Showing the true beauty of white,
The world continues to turn.
As the birds of the forest chirp,
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Jeff Hobbs
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Meghan - 04 August 2006

I love the last few lines of this poem. I like how you ended it with a question, really beautiful. Meghan

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