Tuesday, June 2, 2009

The Turn Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind took time and patience to finally clear
I can now breathe easy when you are so very near
I put you away into the thought of something past
Away and out to nothing all feelings are cast
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Nikunj Sharma 22 July 2009

I was true, when I told you a lie as to God I promised, I would try to be true, to myself atleast even at the risk of being perceived not a man but a beast..

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Deborah Cromer

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