Saturday, October 25, 2008

The Try Of A Lifetime Comments

Rating: 5.0

My team mate tosses the ball to me,
A burst of hope and I advance forward.
The opponents surge forward with glee,
And I dodge them one by one.
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Jordan Farrell
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Eben S - J 30 October 2008

Really good makes me want to play rugby.....now if only i was only i was any good at it Please comment my newest poem on Halloween ' Oh If Only' thanks if you do Jordan

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Jordan Farrell 29 October 2008

No problem ;) I love playing rugby, it's one of my favorite sports. This try was the first for my team.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 October 2008

I used to be a rugby player and this piece reminds me of those lovely moments of the dirty but beautiful games! ! thanks Jordan! !

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Jenny O'Kane 26 October 2008

This is really good, you wouldnt of thought it was a first poem, well done: ]

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