Saturday, February 9, 2019

The Truth Is The Rhythm Comments

Rating: 4.3

Stars are my comforting guide
In the bleak darkness of the empty beach
And the murmuring of the restless tide to reach
Out to hear the many voices across the horizon
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Hazel Durham
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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2020

A poem of poignant thoughts and memories. 'I am sad Sad to lose all the stars Shining from afar As I bleed from an old scar' - the pain of spiritual loss. Loved your poem, Hazel.

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Castellenas John 15 April 2019

Wonderful flow of words and thoughts. I did enjoy Hazel.

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Sekharan Pookkat 02 March 2019

the rhythm of past memories raining as a lullaby from heaven and became s girl so shy who never say goodbye to the warmth of her parents= the warmth of memories preciously narrated

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 February 2019

ur poetry is so beautiful ALL MUST READ U

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Hazel Durham 16 February 2019

Thank you for your wonderful comment!

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

I am sad Sad to lose all the stars Shining from afar As I bleed from an old scar...so good

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

This rhythm is a beautiful lullabie Of the night seeing the truth from the heavens above. Fine rhythm

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

Very beautiful poem...thanks...

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Jankovic Zoran 10 February 2019

Everything is in the family. We can not return the past, but that's why the letters are to keep us memories. It's a fight in which the winner is always known: Love

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Bill Cantrell 09 February 2019

What a beautiful poem, who could not fall in love with this write, green flecked eyes, your lonely darkness resulting from having the true lights in your life removed, the rhythm of the tide is your savior, true love never dies, just wonderful!

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James Mclain 09 February 2019

Great addition to poems that you write. Thank you

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