The Truth Hurts Comments

A very good write Tiger Lily - shows great promise, keep it up.

Very relatable poem. That feeling is terrible and hard to get up from a fall like that. Strange how we blame ourselves from pain someone else caused. That's always how it goes though. Great job! Your poems are getting more mature and I'm really enjoying them.

You shameless self promoter. This is the first...psssht! Anywho, this was a strong honest piece of witing. My favorite line is: You finally realize That the only place he was every perfect Was in your eyes. In that moment you realize. That every moment you shared meant nothing at all. And you've never felt like such an idiot, Or so incredibly small. Many people would be able to relate to this. Nice work.