Wednesday, July 26, 2017

The Truth About The World Comments

Rating: 4.0

Man drained the pool of truth,
And drowned the world in the seas of corruption.
Controlled by the rapacious devil,
Lured by the louche temptress- Fortune,
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Anupriya Palni
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Vaibhav Simha 20 November 2017

Very well written and thought about. Revealing the truth of mankind in today's world. But, needs improvement in rhyming scheme and words as it makes the poem very energetic and kid friendly.9++

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Jaya Das 26 July 2017

Well this is actually the truth of this world....well crafted..eloquently penned...keep writing 😊😊😊😊

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Anupriya Palni 26 July 2017

Thanks a lot, means so much to me

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