The Truth About Sympathy Comments

Lots of verve and emotion here, Tara...Effulgent imagework...depictions of inervative measure...Crisp, mellifluous structuring...Solid craftwork, indeed. ~ F.j.R. ~

I love this poem...especially the part about the buttercream frosting. The way you illustrated your point was so refreshing. It IS a wonder that we all DO keep going, despite life's tragedies. Great write! Blessings. Sheila

I love it! its so true of human nature. Compelling read