The Truth About Forever Comments
How long is forever really?
You told me you'd love me forever and ever.
I actually believed you.
Forever is really short if its how long we made it.
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Good write but you dont need to write all over the page... i will give you top marks ............................................................ ...
a sensitve graph of waiting, realizing and then moving on you are indeed a mature emotional soul
'I am glad that forever is not long at' wonderful transitions written in so simple a language showing the various stages of longing and the realisation and acceptance. Wonderful piece of poetry Kay Kay
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7/20/2025 12:31:30 PM # 1.0.0
this is my favortie...i love the words, and the interanl conflict of your love! you should write it in a little bit more poetic theme...bigger words. use a thesaurus, thats what i did when i was your age. i startted wrting when i was 10. and hey, im only 15 now...everyone needs help with words(;