The Truth Comments

Raven, Have an eye for spelling such as Dont should be Don't and breathe in this case should be breath. I know it is nit-picking but editors are sticklers for that sort of thing. Once again, not too shabby so what the heck are you talking about in your bio about your writing. If you stay the course, you will evolve into what you now only wish you could be. Gregory

Raven, this is brilliant! ! ! it's goin in my favourites, k? i'm adding that poem i wanted you to see to mine so please read. love you. holly spelling error drowing-drowning.

Very strong and on-target!