The Truth Comments

don't give up. life has its ups and downs. you will get your share of goods days and will meet good people too. pl see some of my poems too.

A terse poem that says a great deal about the challenges of the mind.

Hi Lady Grace - sometimes we feel we are on the wrong side of reality. You seem so low in this poem that things can only get better and better and better. Reach out we are all there for you 24/7. Score it a MAX for pathos! Love in Poetry - JOHN

nice and well written, , you tried to tell alot through this short one, ... nice.. hazem al..

crazy welcomes unwise liars meet hypocrites pretender never sleeps awake to every mistake....................ingenious write by imagery, and beautifully expressed by the natures of human being and the words of wisdom,10+++,5thanks for sharing

nice little refelctive poem...without a title...although i am sure it cud hv been found...maybe u liked the aura of mystery well written cheers

from this world of fools crazy welcomes unwise liars meet hypocrites pretender never sleeps awake to every mistake... ------- nice vivid written poem........well expressed thoughts!

truth is present in this great write 10

An interesting poem with no title, Lady Grace, something a bit unusual. I liked your poem, though it expressed some bitter feelings which everyone has every once in awhile. Carl.

A very honest truthful write my lovely, you express deep thoughts in this clever little number...well penned 10

mind-working title speaks a lot striking thoughts 10 lovelots, maia

Grace, Romantic suspense '..........' Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow Creeps in this petty pace from day to day Til the last syllable of recorded time. And all our yesterdays light fools......... CP

Your title of this piece is mind bungling. At first I don't understand, I thought you're joking. Upon the read I found out the lines aren't plastic in nature, you speak the truth particularly the last stanza. I love the truth.

'mind doesn’t sleep intelligence never fall...' Beautiful. Well said Enjoyed reading it Thanks

It is true that 'from this world of fools crazy welcomes unwise! ' What to do here! Simply ignore and proceed!

Yes..........very well said, you have great ideas in your mind.....wonderful as always

Fine! bitter truths penned beautifully! 10+

i'd rather be 'welcomed' than be 'meet' nice piece Lady Grace, may your tribe will multiply

must be an interesting poem.but frankly i could not get the real grievence, surya

What is the name of your poem? a deadly sin or monster by the way good write