The True Peace Comments
In the hot sun, the gypsy leaves to somewhere one has found peace,
In his search, he finds himself in the support of the stars and trees.
In the morning, he marks the trees, ensuring he never returns,
While in the night, he follows the stars in a trust it leads to the place he seeks.
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(cont.) 2 - re: " to gaze the setting shine" i think you mean what i'd say as " to gaze at the sunset" you went from present to past tense, but i DO approve. i may get back for more commenting later. bri :)
1 - i had to look up 'savoury' aka 'savory', not knowing its precise definition. here are both. " adjective: savoury 1. (of food) belonging to the category that is salty or spicy rather than sweet. synonyms: salty, spicy, piquant, tangy 2. morally wholesome or acceptable." (cont.)
Such a nice write.. I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE too.. Naila😃😃😃
this is a well crafted, soothing and a heart touching poetry.....loved the feeling of liberty in this piece and the beauty of nature penned in here....keep writing fellow poet...u r an amazing writer....
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7/23/2025 4:47:28 PM # 1.0.0
This poem cannot be extolled as very fine poetry! But the fact that it was written while you were in grade 8th makes it stand out! When I was in that class I couldn't think of writing even something like a nursery rhyme! Fantastic for your age! 10 on 10