Thursday, January 4, 2007

The Trouble With Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

It goes like this
She offers her hand
You take it, she
Pulls back, says
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Ben Partenay
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Mare Dylan 26 February 2008

Yeah isn't that how that goes.

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Sandra Fowler 05 January 2007

Very appealing poem. Warm regards for a very creative January. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Ivan Donn Carswell 05 January 2007

It is a little death - significant but not fatal. Lovely poem.

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