The Trophy Wife Comments

I really like how this piece takes shape...LOL...on the page and as a read. Your readers see a vibrant lush exotic bloom wither wilt away. well done

The structure is wonderful the alliteration and rhythm sublime truly amazing work very deep calls for a second and third read baubles to bubbles absolutely incredible imagery flows so well that the read is fast and snip which at first is a perfect feel for the 'surface only' theme the words fall quickly like rain off a roof sound as hard and then the reader stops and thinks and only on the reread grasps. That is the true art of poetry poet poet you