Statuesque
quaint roses, daily calls
love notes, sly looks
bright eyes, flashing lashes
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The structure is wonderful the alliteration and rhythm sublime truly amazing work very deep calls for a second and third read baubles to bubbles absolutely incredible imagery flows so well that the read is fast and snip which at first is a perfect feel for the 'surface only' theme the words fall quickly like rain off a roof sound as hard and then the reader stops and thinks and only on the reread grasps. That is the true art of poetry poet poet you
I really like how this piece takes shape...LOL...on the page and as a read. Your readers see a vibrant lush exotic bloom wither wilt away. well done