Tuesday, July 8, 2008

*****the Trombonist Comments

Rating: 3.1

When I was young..
I loved the trombone...
it's beautifully crafted horn
fed by long elegant tubing...
...
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Coach Roth
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Ivan Donn Carswell 25 July 2008

A sensual experience - thrills to the bone... Rgds, Ivan

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Bill Thomas 21 July 2008

Man, that is so sensual, like liquid gold dripping into the soul........

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Music to our ears... t x

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Original Unknown Girl 08 July 2008

Sounds like you're a master at it Coachie. Nice descriptives. HG; -) xx

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Kee Thampi 08 July 2008

real piece of a musical tones you made in it's beautifully crafted horn fed by long elegant tubing... I loved

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Onelia Avelar 08 July 2008

It starts so piano piano 'When I was young../I loved the trombone...'(the reader is on the way to imagine a 90 years old man) , becoming gradually alegro, passionate by the end, an improvised cadence by a soloist to display performance skills of a performer. Wonderful piece of poetry and music.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 July 2008

the audible explosion of passion...a glorious moan...clever write coach...congrats

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