The Trip Comments

nice poem i liked it :)

this was a good poem

A composition written with different imagery though have a great rhyming of words...Packed with different known personalities like Magelan and Helen Keller...just curious what is moonster? Though i didn't find it misspelled because you have said it alot of times, so I assumed that 'moonster' is a name you made to the cresent of the moon, that in your story the moon may appear also like a monster.... As Wolfy said your poem is like Alice in Wonderland......entertaining and penned in eloquence....10

I'm afraid to ask what a moonster is because it might be something like a monster. This is like Alice in wonderland. I really never understood that thing either. So, I'll just avoid making comments about something I know nothing about. I really can't say what this is. But I guess it's fun so that makes it entertaining. GW62

i love this poem and i really see everything here 10+++

This poem was very....interesting...a bit confusing but i think confusing is always a good thing Good Job -Tyease

i must say at first i wasn't really feeling the story line. but i am very glad i finished it out, for it turned out to be a very nice, interesting, and creative work and i am jelous that i did not think of the idea first. i tip my hat to you,10

Brilliant dreamscape you have painted here Vincent...10++

a poem of wild fanasties and imaginations...also quite like alice of wonderland however, the beats of each rhyming pair of lines of your poem are off by quite a lot-the first line may be rather long, while the second drastically short. it is rather hard on the ear when read aloud, so you may want to add or reduce the sylables to make it smoother. i believe in constructive critizism, not just praise-i hope you will take my suggestions into consideration, even if you do not change this poem in any way. lc