The Trip Comments

Lovely poem with a narrative which goes like the running commentary of a safari trip at Ranthambore' with all its thrill and adventure which, though tortuous, offers a learning experience. It also shows us the nature in complete harmony with its flora and fauna. It can educate and motivate us to cope with certain situations in life with maturity. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem, Jasbir ji.

At the end of a beautiful safari trip, you are able to recollect the enchanting scenes that captured your attention! More than that you have learned a valuable lesson from the Kotwal bird to shoo away all nagging thoughts! A nice poem with a great message! !

i enjoyed these lines thx

A fine narration of journey and images of Nature. I love it