Thursday, October 11, 2012

The Tricky Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

She dances like a shimm`ring wraith
Against the sequined sky
Adorned with skirts of misty green
Bright flick`ring there up high
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Valerie Dohren
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Dave James 11 November 2012

Loved the pace of this poem, as always a good read.

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Karen Sinclair 22 October 2012

Beautifully uplifting, love the title, seems somehow cheeky...wonderful language...tyvm

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2012

Beautiful poem about the splendour and mystery of the sky above and so original!

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Walterrean Salley 17 October 2012

A beautiful poem. Very enjoyable, I read it twice. Thanks.

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Dee Corpolongo 16 October 2012

Such a beautiful poem, all about nature and the skies. The shows of nature from the moon, stars, sun and skies are so beautiful and can not be compared to anything else. Thank you for this beautiful description in such a great poem.

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Heather Wilson 14 October 2012

Lovely poem, the marvels of nature are just wonderful

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Neela Nath Das 12 October 2012

A different type of write from your pen. Loved this one also. Great!

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Hans Vr 12 October 2012

Brilliant poem. The sky is a wonderful place.

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Valsa George 12 October 2012

Who is this tricky lady who entices and disappears as quickly as she comes? ? Let us ask her not to be so fickle and linger for some more time! Beautiful! !

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Dave Walker 11 October 2012

A beautiful poem, A fantastic write.

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Danny Draper 11 October 2012

Is her name Araura Borealis, I can see her majestic presence and the Suns explosive radiance to entice her grace and beauty. Thank you.

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