Friday, May 1, 2009

The Trickle Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could feel the moist gathering
Yielding into the uneven folds and valleys

Micro rivulets, merging to flow
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Anita Atina
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Al Ramos 10 May 2009

Knowing that there is more sweat and tears to come, great job.

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Fiona Davidson 09 May 2009

image rich write...enjoyable read....10++++

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LOVEFOOL Aka 04 May 2009

Such clarity giving beautiful significance to something so small 10++

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Alison Cassidy 02 May 2009

You have taken a tiny detail of life and enlarged it with your attentiveness to detail and your poetic awareness. The result is quite magnificent - personal and universal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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