I could feel the moist gathering
Yielding into the uneven folds and valleys
Micro rivulets, merging to flow
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Such clarity giving beautiful significance to something so small 10++
You have taken a tiny detail of life and enlarged it with your attentiveness to detail and your poetic awareness. The result is quite magnificent - personal and universal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Knowing that there is more sweat and tears to come, great job.