Friday, March 10, 2006

The Trench Comments

Rating: 4.8

They went to war, because their country called,
so proud of their uniform, as they marched off to war.
They heard the guns that they were up against,
as they made their home in a muddy trench.
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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2006

A fine piece from you again Sylvia, so much passion and heart-felt sentiments for those who had to toil under such conditions Love Duncan X

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Scarlett Treat 11 March 2006

What a beautiful tribute to those who died to give us our freedom. I felt the mud and saw the blood, and felt their desire to serve. I do see some misspelled words and a couple of grammatical boo-boos, but otherwise, this is a fantastic work! Scarlett

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