Monday, January 4, 2016

The Tree That Wouldn't Shut Up! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hated to pass the talking tree,
It made me feel all undone,
Raveling on in its revery
Like a racquet, coming unstrung,
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David Lewis Paget
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Weldon Davis 12 January 2016

There are two things I like about this poem 1) How you referenced classical poets in a creative way at the end and 2) The conversation that you held with out of all things a tree.. :) Funny and Well versed 10

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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