Sunday, August 17, 2008

The Tree That Wouldn'T Move Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I went out to the store
To buy my rope to kill myself
I wondered around the place
Looking in sadness at the lost
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 02 September 2009

a depressed poem! death is our final destination, don't search for DEATH. it'll come soon or later... keep the bright side of things...

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Stacey Watts 13 September 2008

ok interesting poem.. That would be so the way my life goes at this point. You know the broken branch...

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Lesly Dee 24 August 2008

WOW. good poem. i love your work :)

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DELETED NOW 17 August 2008

maybe u weren't meant to die.... I don't want u to bro.

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Serenity Prayer 17 August 2008

its not a funny poem but the limb breaking was kinda funny, you have to admit. but im glad it broke because it provended you from making a big mistake. great job.

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