Thursday, May 12, 2011

The Tree Of Failed Dreams Comments

Rating: ★3.9

Like a candle burning on a window sill
In the darkness of the night admist silence
She lies in quiet desperation in hopes that a falling star will shine its light of mercy upon her broken dreams
It was the high of love that didn't last
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Leah Ayliffe
tree Battles Desperation innocence solitude
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Leah Ayliffe

Leah Ayliffe

Toronto
Leah Ayliffe
Leah Ayliffe
Toronto
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